Olivia Costillo, Daughter of the Boricua (Kindle 2022)
This multi-generational family saga tells the stories of three women connected by a bloodline; they are all descendants of Moctezuma II. Love for Puerto Rico is a theme running through.
Isabella and her sisters watch as her father, Moctezuma II greets ‘the white god’ Cortés with gifts and garland of flowers. Two weeks later, the Spaniards are burning huts and raping women. Moctezuma is killed, and with his dying breath he curses the seed of Cortés.
After the Spaniards are expelled, Isabella married first one successor to the Aztec throne, then another, until the conquistadors return and Cortés seizes her. She learns Spanish and converts to Christianity. She determines she will bear Cortés’ child. One night with the conquistador, and she conceives and bears Leonor, but then rejects the child. On her deathbed, she frees her slaves. Leonor inherits her estate and also Moctezuma’s curse.
Leonor’s bloodline unravels to Puerto Rico and then to Malibu, California in her descendant Josie Antheus. Her parents’ marriage is breaking down, and she’s taken up cliff diving to take her mind off it. She dives badly and loses consciousness underwater. As she comes to, she hears a voice in some foreign language, which somehow, she understands. It is not her first such experience.
Back in time to 1895 in Isla de Mona, Puerto Rico, Liani Agüeybana rows her canoe to visit her Tía Anani. Her people, the Taíno, are almost extinct. She brings news that Abuela Karaya is sick. Abuela says, ‘the fault is on Cortés’.
The years progress in each timeframe. Liani finds love and makes a family. Isabella and her daughter Josie love, divorce and love again, and make a family. Moctezuma’s curse and the vicissitudes of weather and history challenge them, but love for each other pulls them through.
The first Isabella’s story is bit heavily third person omniscient, but the subsequent stories have more Showing and more dialogue. I couldn’t understand why she would purposefully seduce Cortés but then reject the child.
The stories are vibrant, and I love the concept of writing about the lives of people in different timeframes from the same bloodline, Moctezuma’s curse following them down the centuries. Despite the theme of Moctezuma’s curse, the story is not overly supernatural (except that Isabella and Josie see visions); the supposed effects of the curse just look like natural tragedies—fatal accidents, marital infidelity. The narrative jumps around in time in no particular order, culminating—as you would expect—in 2017. It works, as each vignette brings you closer to understanding the big picture of this bloodline’s story.
This review was orignially written for Reedsy Discovery.









