B. Luiciano Barsuglia, Seven Rivers: The Darkness (Koa Aloha Media 2025)
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/235105617-seven-rivers
A supernatural journey of redemption
Cora and Gabe are fighting. She has a baseball bat; he has a gun.
It ends badly in a devastating car accident, and she ends up at the Seven Rivers Recovery Clinic in bandages. But this is no pristine hospital, no wholesome rehab facility. It starts with the tea–they’re giving her some kind of hallucinogen–then the pain and the terror, the savage bandage changes. The place operates according to an unfamiliar set of rules, which Cora now has to work out. The other residents aren’t welcoming, either. But at least they seem to know why they are there.
‘Some are here for recovery; others for redemption. Why are you here?’ Lady asks.
‘I’m hiding out, I guess,’ says Cora.
I liked the parallels between pain and terror, but the horror begins too soon. We need to build up to it. And there’s too little action. We start hearing about ‘the ragged pulse of her fear’ before we even see anything to be afraid of. There’s no explanation as to why she’s ended up in this place and no explanation as to why Gabe is threatening her life.
The chapter headings read like a ‘Pilgrim’s Progress’–Integrity, Acceptance, Humility. Cora is on a journey of self-discovery and redemption about which we get no clues until page 109. She witnesses horrors. Ex-robbers in a heist gone wrong. Each room, each interaction with the other guests confronts her with the consequences of her guilty past.
A few too many clichés for me, coupled with some phrases we don’t really know the meaning of–‘an unease that lingered like a shadow’. I liked ‘tremors that shook her very atoms’.
I liked the Concept–a surreal environment (Purgatory?) forcing someone to accept the consequences of their past behaviour, but Cora’s psychology doesn’t really come through. The unexplainedness contributes a surreal, spooky Kafka-esque atmosphere, yet I didn’t get the sense that Cora was trying to figure it out, which was frustrating. We can’t empathise with Cora’s suffering if we don’t understand why.
In the end, she confronts the fear of death, something I don’t see treated in many novels, surprising considering that it’s probably the biggest fear humans face.









