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  • Review: The Warrior Gene

    Review: The Warrior Gene

    Neil Staley, The Warrior Gene (Kindle 2023)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/77776478-the-warrior-gene?ref=nav_sb_ss_1_31

    Apex Labs agents Reg Thompson and Harry Caine are on a security stake-out, and a Fed from the FBI, Joshua Smith, is on a case nearby. He introduces himself, then shoots them in the head.
    Back at the lab, Dr Alex Bishop’s boss Henry Drexler calls him to take a look at Batch DD-401A. ‘incomplete data utility’. Yet the client is moving forward the launch of Phase One.
    A rhesus monkey named Jimmy is injected with ‘the Icarus particle’, and the moneymen watch as Jimmy viciously destroys an uninjected monkey.
    There are numerous characters and minor inter-woven plotlines—the secret commemorative reward in the box, James Devlin’s promotion and abduction by his father and Blakenstock, two security agents murdered outside Alex’s lodgings, Mrs Galasky’s witness statement, the investigation against the religious cult leader, the fire at the lab, the flash drive and the other-worldly voice, Audrey’s backstabbing, the Mamluks and The Overwatch in the desert, Harun the Invisible Light—and that’s only up to chapter 16. At the final hour the ritual in the desert, Klick’s abusive religious cult and the warrior gene storylines converge.
    The multiplicity of characters makes it hard to keep track—my brain protested at being introduced to a whole new set of characters in chapter 20. The ‘head-hopping’ (switching of Points of View) may be confusing, but it adds intrigue and gives the reader a chance to piece things together without having everything explained.
    This novel is brilliant at creating suspense, using various skilful techniques as well as the old cliff-hanger. The science appears spot on—indeed, MAO-A has been called the ‘warrior gene’. The dialogue includes a perfect comeback to ‘age before beauty’—‘assholes before angels’.
    I couldn’t understand the timeline of: James and his father’s boss Blakenstock giving him a big promotion, Blakenstock catching him in flagrante with a woman, and his massage (‘two hours later’ than the in flagrante). And what was the ‘giant fist smashing the building to the ground’ on page 161? And after Alex knew how evil the code was, why did he still want to save it?
    The Concept—a techno/detective thriller involving the so-called ‘warrior gene’ is great. This follows in the tradition of techno-thrillers about scientifically engineered super-soldiers (Frank Herbert, Dune; Robert A Heinlein, Starship Troopers; Jeff Vintar, ‘Hardwired’ [iRobot]) and borrows the elite troop of Mamluks guarding secrets in the desert from ‘The Mummy’, the hole in the centre of the ceiling from ‘The Fifth Element’ and the ‘bloodline’ idea from The Da Vinci Code—all tropes too good to exclude.
    The action is well paced using scene-setting and dialogue; the final chapters are a rollercoaster of excitement with a marvellous twist at the end. It would make a great action film.
    This review first appeared in Reedsy Discovery.

  • Review: The Sinner’s Mark

    Review: The Sinner’s Mark

    S. W. Perry, The Sinner’s Mark (Corvus 2023)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/74836672-the-sinner-s-mark

    Elizabethan mystery full of period character

    Nicholas Shelby, the queens’ physician, is summoned. Queen Elizabeth is fading but is nevertheless still interested in ‘young men with good calves and passable looks’.

    Shelby’s father is accused of distributing a seditious tract, and he is determined to clear his name. One of the suppliers of ingredients for wife Bianca’s simples, Aksel Leezen, has willed to her his house in the Steelyard. There, Leezen has left plaster casts of bones—écorché models, for studying anatomy, explains Nicholas—and a gruesome wooded effigy of a dead girl with half a face. Three young boys go missing.

    An old war-buddy arrives—his marvellous name is Petrus Eusebius Schenk.

    As Shakespeare’s players act the assassination of Julius Caesar, actors in another plot are laying dastardly plans. As well as the nods to the Gunpowder Plot, which would happen five years after the events in this story, there are bits that were inspired by real occurrences in Elizabethan London.

    Dialogue is good, but we don’t really hear the voices of the characters. The Voice is that of omniscient narrator.

    This is sixth in Perry’s Elizabethan Jackdaw Mysteries series, and we know Nicholas, Bianca, Rose and Ned from the earlier books. Their characters are further developed here, and necessary backstory is well handled.

    The plot develops languidly, and the slow pace allows for character development and scene-setting and gives one a feeling of the period, when even a trip across London required a horse ride, a wherry across the river, a stay in an inn.

    Another element comes across as true to the period—the schizophrenic and precarious nature of the religious ups and downs and the shifting goalposts on what was considered heresy. The character Ned voices the experience of someone newly inspired by revolutionary Protestant sermons, and Schenk’s zealotry is believable.

    This review first appeared in Historical Novels Review.

  • Review: The Priest’s Wife

    Review: The Priest’s Wife

    A. G. Rivett, The Priest’s Wife (Pantolwen Press 2023)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/198910874-the-priest-s-wife?ref=nav_sb_ss_1_24

    When her husband Hugh the parish priest dies, her adopted son Dhion—a time-traveller from the future introduced in Book One, The Seaborne—his wife Shinane and the other villagers help Morag with her loss. Shinane is carrying new life—twins.

    Morag has lost her husband and come Bride’s Day will have to vacate the priests’ house. She has lost her place in the mediaeval Scottish/Irish island’s society and even feels alienated from her new grandchildren. She travels to Kimmoil, her birthplace two days north, on a quest to discover the identity of her own mother. Aided by the mystical Guardians of the Island, she embarks on a spiritual awakening.

    She finds the welcome in Kimmoil less than warm; the town is suffering from an outbreak of scurvy. She meets the daughter of her half-brother, Sorcha, unloved as she had been, and Morag brings the girl back with her.

    After Hugh’s death, the villagers look to Morag for pastoral and ritual care. ‘Ye’re the priestess, Auntie,’ says Sorcha. But when the new priest Aidan arrives, he tries to pull the parish away from their traditional druidic beliefs and customs, now deemed heretical, and butts head with the shareg (headman). The lives of Aidan and Morag reach a crisis point.

    Beautifully written and evocative of the culture of the time. No anachronistic language intrudes upon the beautiful picture. We see a misty, green world, where the Otherworld of the Sidhe is not so distant from life among the living.

    A doctor, crofter and ordained minister himself, Rivett understands well the tight relationship of the peasants to the land and the seasons, and the religious ideas and practices of the period. The contrast between the ‘nature-affirming’ Celtic faith and the ‘nature-denying’ Catholic is very much part of the dynamic between Aidan and Morag.

    The review first appeared in Historical Novels Review.

  • Review: St Francis: An Instrument of Peace

    Review: St Francis: An Instrument of Peace

    Wendy Mason, St Francis (novum pro 2018)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/42850145-st-francis—an-instrument-of-peace?ac=1&from_search=true&qid=hxdce2AC0F&rank=1

    Francesco Bernardone grows up in Assisi, the son of a wealthy cloth merchant. From an early age, he seems ill disposed toward a life of business, instead preferring drinking and singing. He is influenced by a literary diet of troubadour’s romances and longs to be a great knight like Roland. He was not particularly religious.

    One day, keeping shop for his father, he gives the entire day’s takings to a beggar, and feels spiritually enriched by the act, despite fierce scolding from his father.

    Defeated in battle, he is held for ransom at Pelugia for one year. In his small cell, he develops his method of ‘walking and praying’. He hears the voice of God, and repents his past lifestyle, beginning with the penance of a pilgrimage to Rome.

    On his return, he repairs the church of St Damiano. He hides to escape his father’s wrath but has to leave home to finally be safe. He becomes an itinerant repairer of churches, dedicated to teaching others ‘how it feels to love and support one another, to bathe in God’s grace and live in anticipation of everlasting life’ and founds an order of friars.

    The story is fictional but woven around what we do know of the historical St Francis. It is told in first person, and we walk alongside him. Mason really manages to bring the saint to life. His character arc, also, is interesting: the influences in his life and how they shape him and how he changes his life in order to fulfil his mission. The stories of St Francis’ life are absolutely beautiful. His travels feature some gorgeous, loving descriptions of nature, affection for which St Francis is so legendary.

    There is just enough of his early family life to explain how he was motivated by his father’s disapproval, and just enough action to keep the pace up.

    An enjoyable and informative read, and spiritually uplifting.

    I received an ARC from the author.

  • Review: The Hero with a Thousand Faces

    Review: The Hero with a Thousand Faces

    Joseph Campbell, The Hero with a Thousand Faces (1949; this edition Princeton University Press 1972)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/588138.The_Hero_With_a_Thousand_Faces?ref=nav_sb_ss_1_30

    A ‘Bible’ for the student of mythology, religion, literature or psychotherapy


    Through a comprehensive analysis of the world’s mythology and folklore, Joseph Campbell outlines the universal motifs of adventure. He examines myth—the basis of religion, literature, psychoanalysis and human culture itself, the ‘secret opening through which the inexhaustible energies of the cosmos pour in’.
    The goal of the Hero is the ’self-achieved submission’ to bring back the union between god and the collective of people. To do so, he must symbolically die and be reborn as ‘universal man’, purged of sin (disobedience to the divine will) and death (identification with the mortal form). Campbell examines ‘archetypes of the collective unconscious’, showing how this formula is followed time and again, from the ancient Sumerian myth of Inanna to examples from modern psychoanalysis.
    The universal pattern followed by adventure myths is similar to the five-part structure of novels—beginning with the ‘inciting incident’, followed by several ‘slaps’ and maybe a ‘false victory’. The protagonist (hero) is required to overcome some obstacle to realise that he has been living a lie—the ’dark night of the soul’. To achieve the final goal, he needs to accept a new truth.
    The universal formula of myth begins with ‘the call to adventure’, where the hero, sometimes reluctantly, accepts his mission. He is helped by some ‘supernatural aid’ and may be given some magical weapons, ‘crosses the first threshold’ to undergo initiation and overcomes a series of often symbolic trials. He is often challenged by a usually-female temptress or a trickster-god. A crisis point arrives where the hero is close to death or is believed dead—he is swallowed by the unknown, in ‘the belly of the whale’. He may have to go through some form a self-annihilation to be reborn. He ‘meets with the goddess’, a mystical union where a usually-female authority figure intervenes to offer guidance, representing ‘the bliss of infancy regained’. Sometimes he ‘tricks’ the king or the god to obtain the treasure or the princess or vanquish the monster. He reconciles with the Father and returns home bringing the ‘ultimate boon’ to his family or kingdom.
    In Part II Campbell reviews the ‘cosmogonic (creation of the universe) cycle’, from psychology to metaphysics. Mythology can be understood as ‘psychology misread as biography, history and cosmology’. The cosmogonic cycle is carried forward by the hero as embodiment of his people’s destiny. The modern hero seeks to ‘bring to light again the lost Atlantis of the co-ordinated soul’. As for religious cult (as contrasted to black magic), it’s all about the community’s ‘submission to the inevitables of destiny’, e.g., not so much beseaching the gods to stave off winter starvation, but rather preparing the people for a period of hardship.
    Enormously erudite, peppered with quotes from Freud, Heraclitus, Euripides, Ovid. I found if I read more than 50 pages in one sitting, I got a headache. Almost half the text is in the footnotes, most of which, I admit, I didn’t read, even though they were probably all fascinating. The complexity is probably inevitable—he tackled a huge subject and he drew from every corner of the earth and from every historical period in his illustrative examples.
    For the student of mythology, this book is one of a triad of must-reads—including The White Goddess by Robert Graves and The Golden Bough by James Frazer. Although I have to give 5 stars because it’s a ‘great work’, I didn’t enjoy reading this one. Perhaps it’s because the material is not so new to me at time of reading.

  • Review: Bar Kokhba, the Jew who Defied Hadrian and Challenged Rome

    Review: Bar Kokhba, the Jew who Defied Hadrian and Challenged Rome

    Lindsay Powell, Bar Kokhba, the Jew who Defied Hadrian and Challenged Rome (Pen and Sword Military 2021)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/57168141-bar-kokhba?ref=nav_sb_ss_1_23

    In researching my fourth novel, The Receptacles of St. Ananias, set in 132 CE when the Bar Kokhba Revolt, the third great Jewish revolt against Rome, was happening, I bought this (Kindle) book after searching for—without finding—a novel on the subject. Since then, I’ve found one—My Husband Bar Kokhba by Andrew Sanders—although there are many military novels from the Roman soldiers’ point of view. I selected this history as one hopefully less obviously Zionist in tone as Yigael Yadin’s or others’ take.
    There are two problems facing those wanting to learn about Bar Kokhba in the 21st century. The first is that unlike the first Jewish Revolt of 66-73 CE, where we have contemporaneous accounts from Flavius Josephus and Tacitus , the precious and almost only records we have of the Bar Kokhba Revolt are the letters discovered in the 1950s in the Cave of Letters, some of them in the general’s own hand. Without knowing any of the context, these letters can read as cryptically as the Dead Sea Scrolls.
    Rabbinical sources refer to the man as just ‘the southerner’ (from Judaea). Cassius Dio’s account of the war doesn’t name him, and neither do Christian writings mention him by name. We don’t even know the location of Betar (maybe modern Bittar), the site of the famous last stand. What we know is pieced together from scant references in ancient histories and archeological finds.
    What information we have is highly susceptible to mythologisation. For example, the destruction of the First Temple, the destruction of the Second Temple and the fall of Bar Kokhba are all said to have fallen on Tisha b’Av (the 9th of month Av). Twice may be a coincidence, but three times is, I would imagine, a myth. Bar Kokhba is supposed to have cut off the little fingers of his men to ensure none were ‘afraid or faint-hearted’, hardly something a general in his right mind would do. Unfortunately, Powell accepts these ‘facts’ as history.
    The second problem is that Bar Kokhba has been claimed ideologically as a David-against-Goliath hero of Zionism. David ben Gurion, first prime minister in 1948, proclaimed, ‘The chain that was broken in the days of Shimon ben Kokhba…was reinforced in our days, and the Israeli army is again ready for the battle in its own land.’ A revision of this viewpoint is under way, e.g., Elon Gilad (2015) .
    Powell recounts the history using a literary technique I found particularly interesting. He expounds the history from the origins of the Israelites to Bar Kokhba as he makes his way through the galleries of the Israel Museum in Jerusalem. He goes through the life of Emperor Hadrian as he’s on his way to interview Professor So-and-So. He paints the second century topography and road system by recounting the progress of Hadrian’s well-documented travels. He talks about events in Jewish history after recounting similar things that happened on his travels. It makes the read more like a chatty travelogue than a dry history book and makes it more accessible.
    There is a lot of information in this book which is only laterally related to Bar Kokhba. Unfortunately, so little is known about the man and the war he waged that otherwise, it would have been a very thin book.

  • Review: The Bookseller’s Tale

    Review: The Bookseller’s Tale

    Ann Swinfen, The Bookseller’s Tale (Shakenoak Press 2016)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/30639175-the-bookseller-s-tale?ac=1&from_search=true&qid=Y89I8PTLtG&rank=1

    Nicholas, his sister Margaret and children Alysoun and Rafe are rare survivors of the great pestilence in Oxford that caught his wife Elizabeth and Margaret’s children and abusive husband. Nicholas is official bookseller to the university, and his two scriveners are at work copying.

    On his way home from collecting goose feathers at a local farm, he spots a body floating in the river. The boy is a young student, William Farringdon. Jordain, Warden of the Hall at the university, collaborates with Nicholas in investigating the crime.

    The next day, students come round the shop and recount how William had been worried of late. One of them, Peter de Wallingford, said William had been planning to take holy orders. He had seen him meeting with two ‘prosperous looking’ men, and he’d seemed afraid of them. Nicholas and Jordain visit William’s room at Hart Hall and discover that he had been at work copying a fine Irish psalter. How had he borrowed the original, kept under lock in the Merton collection?

    A mystery involving famous antique books ensues, and Nicholas and Jordain track down clues helped by local tradesmen and farmers, risking danger to themselves.

    It’s very well written, and the language is believably antique, with enough mediaeval minutiae to make one feel in the moment. I was fascinated by the details of the bookmaking industry—how parchment was made, what raw materials were used for pigments—as well as details of how crimes were investigated and prosecuted in the Middle Ages. Several interesting characters enter the picture, and the pace of the investigation is lively but not rushed.

    This 14th century mediaeval who-dunnit is Book 1 in the Oxford Medieval Mysteries Series. I can presume that the others are of equivalent quality. It is an easy read and would be suitable for a younger readership.

    This review first appeared in Historical Novels Review.

  • Review: The Bar Kokhba Revolt

    Review: The Bar Kokhba Revolt

    Captivating History, The Bar Kokhba Revolt (Kindle 2021)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/59720401-the-bar-kokhba-revolt?ac=1&from_search=true&qid=CeXt0elXwi&rank=1

    The book starts with a whistle-stop tour of Jewish history, beginning with the Exodus (without going into the fascinating question of historicity as backed up by the archaeological record, the biblical account is used). Then, whizzing through the Babylonians, Persian, Seleucids, Ptolemies and Hasmoneans (Maccabees), we’re up to the Romans by Chapter 2.
    The speed made my head spin, but the simplification of the Sadducees/Pharisees conflicts during the Hasmonean period was helpful.
    Herod became vassal king to Rome by backing the right Romans at the right time. The Romans began the practice, so vilified by future Zealots, of appointing their own puppet high priests.
    With a view to the Bar Kokhba revolt, all this background serves to outline the reasons why Jews wanted independence from Roman rule. Underlying it all was a cultural antagonism going back centuries of conflict between Greek-speaking Greco-Roman-influenced ‘Hellenists’ and Aramaic-speaking ‘Hebrews’. Then there was a religious conviction that Israelites were destined by God to be free. Successive Roman authorities didn’t help matters by trying to erect statues of emperors, considered religious anathema. Antagonism between Judaeans and their neighbours—Idumaeans, Samaritans, Galilean—dates back to the Hasmoneans, who forced Jewish customs and religions on the conquered people.
    After the first Jewish Revolt, things got worse, with the fiscus judaicus tax imposed only on Jews and anti-Semitism from both rulers and populace. Emperor Domitian was openly hostile to Jews (including Christians). There was a second Jewish Revolt with the Kitos uprisings of 115-117 CE in the Diaspora.
    The final straw before Bar Kokhba erupted in 132 CE is debated. Hadrian rescinded his promise to rebuild the Temple and began construction of a Roman colony Aelia Capitolina atop the ruins of Jerusalem. He planned to site a Temple of Jerusalem right on Temple Mount, although this may not have happened until after the revolt.
    Interestingly, it ends by reviewing the various scholarly controversies concerning the revolt, a situation engendered by the paucity of real information, which was itself probably engendered by the completeness of the defeat and the enormous deathtoll. Unfortunately, the conclusion reached is a silly, revisionist one—that it was ‘basically a cultural misunderstanding’.

  • Review: Writing Fiction

    Review: Writing Fiction

    James Essinger, Writing Fiction (The Conrad Press 2019)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/50199457-writing-fiction—a-user-friendly-guide?ac=1&from_search=true&qid=aIXIcYOFM0&rank=1

    When I first began writing novels, I was determined that I was not going to ‘follow the rules’. How boring it was always to have a ‘five-part structure’, always to follow the stages in ‘the hero’s journey’.
    However, now that I’ve grown up, I realise that there are rules. Readers expect them, and if your novel doesn’t follow them, the reader feels disappointed. We want a big climax in the middle and some kind of resolution at the end. We can’t empathise with a protagonist who’s fighting for a goal we don’t understand, and we lose interest in a hero who wins too easily.
    It begins with the basics—write an outline, show don’t tell, character and voice. A novel needs a hero who is grappling with stakes the reader considers significant.
    Two of the most important basics Essinger calls ‘golden rules’. 1. Stick to your story. Everything in your novel must be ‘pursued’; it must have something to do with the story. Any detail that’s out of the ordinary needs to be there for a reason. 2. Make your hero be an active participant in the story. Avoid authorial intrusion.
    Essinger explodes some old canards. For example, if you ‘only write what you know’, your novel is probably going to be as boring as real life usually is. No, you should use your imagination, but only write what you know, emotionally. ‘Tell’ is not an inferior cousin of ‘Show’; it is simply a different way of telling a story, useful in particular circumstances, for instance, to summarise events in order to move the plot along quickly.
    In a useful Appendix, Essinger includes specific advice on common mistakes he’s seen as a publisher.
    He concludes, ‘So let’s get to work.’
    This how-to book is a good exposition of the basics of fiction writing, featuring illustrative examples from literature and films. It would be a useful handbook for someone who is just starting out. This book adds to a growing shelf in my office of how-to-write books, as, now I know, I need all the help I can get.
    I was given an ARC by the author.

  • Review: Heart of Darkness

    Review: Heart of Darkness

    Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness (1899; this edition Green Integer 2003)

    https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/4900.Heart_of_Darkness?ref=nav_sb_ss_1_17

    A dreamlike tale of a man’s moral integrity challenged by the barbarity around him


    In this famous novella, Marlow recounts the story of his voyage to the Belgian Congo one evening while he and others are moored on a boat in the Thames.
    It is written in an old-fashioned style (published 1899) that modern readers may find difficult (I did). For example, he begins with a long, though beautiful, description of the Thames ‘crowded with memories of men and ships’, which strains the attention span.
    Marlow decides to seek his fortune. He wants to go to somewhere that was ‘a blank space on the map’ and procures himself a position as captain of a steamboat involved in the ivory trade. He finds that the steamboat has sunk and is dredged up to dry dock, where Marlow must repair it, an enterprise thwarted by the inefficiency of bureaucracy and the resulting lack of supplies. High on his list of wants is ‘rickets’, of which there had been thousands at the coast.
    From other white men he hears complimentary things about the mysterious Kurtz, another ivory trader, the man he is supposed to meet. He eventually sets off with a crew of cannibals, and his descriptions of the jungle they float past—dense, oppressive silences ‘with the word ivory ringing in the air’, punctuated from time to time by threatening native drums whipping the crew into a frenzy—are dark and disturbing.
    Finally arriving at Kurtz’s Inner Station, they discover that the man has set himself up as a sort of god, and a collection of severed heads on posts attest to his omnipotence. Kurtz is determined to ‘civilise’ the natives, his motto being ‘exterminate the brutes’. The steamer breaks down, and they have to dry dock again. Kurtz dies, uttering the last words, ‘the horror, the horror’.
    Marlow struggles to maintain his moral integrity, with all the savagery around him, and he struggles against Kurtz in his descent into madness. He barely survives but makes it back to Europe.
    Along the Congo River, exploitation of the native black men is at its most raw, and the scenes Marlow describes are nightmarish. Various techniques add to the dreaminess. For example, no character other than Kurtz is named. It is often unclear where Marlow is situated within the narrative. He begins telling us him impressions of a place before he has told us he has travelled to that place. The dream-like feel of this book led to its providing the inspiration for the film Apocalypse Now. The nebulousness is artful, but makes for difficult reading.
    This is a ‘hero’s journey’ where the hero doesn’t prevail, but instead returns home haunted by the horrors he has seen.